I adore Dellani Oakes, her charm, wit, and writing style are a delight. I am honored to call her friend and excited to be a part of the announcement of her latest book. It is an exciting book, filled with all of the elements, which keep one glued to their seats, up late at night, unable to put it down. Thank you Dellani for giving me this chance to help with the advance press for Conduct Unbecoming, a Teague McGurty novel.
Dellani
Oakes makes her home in Florida, but she grew up in Western Nebraska.
Before that, she lived in Tennessee, Ohio, Massachusetts and Texas.
After graduating from high school, she added Mississippi. The diverse
locations gave her a unique perspective on life. Always a people
watcher, Dellani put that talent to use when she became an author.
Bitten
by the writing bug early in life, Dellani first pursued poetry as her
medium of self-expression. Soon, she moved on the song parodies and
then short stories and humorous essays. Once she got to high school,
it became apparent that she needed to learn to spell when she got a
paper back from her English teacher, “For content: A+. For
mechanics: F.” That comment changed her life, forcing her to focus
as much on how she said things as well as what she
said.
Dellani
took up writing full time when her youngest son started kindergarten
in 2002. Since then, she has published five books. She has two
romantic suspense novels are with Tirgearr Publishing and an
historical romance and two sci-fi novels with Second Wind Publishing.
She has also contributed to several anthologies, MJ Magazine and
shares her unpublished works on her blog.
Because
she loves to talk to other authors, Dellani hosts two talk shows a
month on Blog Talk Radio. Listen in every second Monday of the month
at 4:00 PM Eastern for Dellani's Tea Time, and every fourth
Wednesday, at 4:00 PM Eastern for What's Write for Me.
Armed with bravado and wonderfully
supportive friends and family, Dellani has embarked on a journey of
self-publication. Conduct Unbecoming is her first venture into
this new, and somewhat scary, world.
Where
are you from?
I
was born in Tennessee, but have lived in Ohio, Massachusetts, Texas,
Nebraska,
Mississippi and now live in Florida.
What
components, in your opinion, make a great story?
A
great story needs good conflict, a discernible opposite of the main
characters. This can be in the form of an actual person, entity or
group. It can also be some hurdle the hero has to overcome. With good
conflict comes good characters. They must be up to the task they've
been presented with, even if they don't think so themselves. Despite
weaknesses, they manage to rise to the challenge and overcome it.
Good plot dynamics also add to the story. No good tale can go
straight up to the climax and straight down to the denouement. There
have to be levels built, like steps, guiding the reader to the
conclusion.
What
was the hardest part of the story to write?
It
was hard to keep the plot fresh and not do a rehash of The Ninja
Tattoo. I didn't want the characters in hiding, as they were
before. However, when I thought of a full on confrontation, the
characters stopped me. Two of the bad guys were too formidable and
unpredictable for a frontal assault. I would have lost all my main
characters and had a slaughter of innocents on my hands. Teague was
champing at the bit to take the villain head to head and I couldn't
let him. Amazingly, Jasper, who is even more impetuous than Teague,
talked him out of it. After that, I let them decide and I like where
they went with the story.
What
was the easiest part of the story to write?
The
love scenes were the easiest part. I love having people fall in love
and bringing them together for the first time is always kind of
magical.
Was
there much research involved?
Since
I had already written a story with similar aspects, there was very
little research involved. I did ask an author friend of mine, Seth
Bailey, for advice on a rifle for one of the scenes. Though the
weapon isn't specifically named, he gave me some useful information.
He also told me a real sniper wouldn't be seen or miss, which was
exactly what I was after.
What
do you feel is your biggest strength as a writer?
Dialogue,
hands down. I wrote plays in college and that has stayed with me.
Info dumps, back story, characterization—all this and more can be
portrayed through dialogue.
When
your first started writing, did anything about the writing process
surprise you?
I
didn't think about how long it would take to get from the beginning
to the end. I would get these fabulous ideas and couldn't type fast
enough. What I thought would take an hour to write, often took 2 or
3.
Do
you celebrate when you finish a story, and if so, how?
I
do celebrate a little. I keep my book files separated by Finished and
Unfinished files. When a book is done, I move it from one folder to
the other and do a little happy dance. Sometimes, if it's a been a
real bear to finish, I'll have a glass of wine. I love finishing a
book, but once it's done, the real work—editing—begins. I give
myself some down time afterward, before I move on to a new project or
begin my first phase of editing.
Do
you have a set writing routine?
No.
My time is too broken up with errands I have to run, needs of my
family (buggers have to eat, after all) and all the Mom and Wife
stuff I have to do. I try to get in my office by 10:00 most mornings,
and put in time on my various projects. Sometimes, it's editing,
other times it's setting up my blog posts. Other days, I go on
Facebook & promote my books or radio shows. I try to put that off
until later in the day, though, because it's easy to get sucked in.
I
write or edit awhile, break for a late lunch, watch reruns on Netflix
and relax, before going back to work. I take another break to fix
dinner. Sometimes, I stop and watch a movie with my family, then I'm
back at my computer until around 1:00 a.m. I often have to make
myself go to bed. I'm not usually sleepy, but I can't allow myself to
stay up all night, even though I'd like to.
Do
you listen to music when you write?
Always!
I have to listen to music. It keeps me going and makes me feel
energized. It also serves a more mundane purpose, it provides a
screen between me and the outside world. Even in my office, the
sounds of the rest of the house annoy and interfere. I've learned to
filter out and ignore some, but I can't separate myself from it all.
Also, I have constant ringing in my left ear. The doctors can't do
anything about it, so I play music to tone that down.
You’re
marooned on a desert island. What’s the one book you’d want with
you, and why?
Give
me unlimited paper & pens, I'll write my own. The voices in my
head won't shut up just because I'm not at my computer.
What’s
next for you? Can we look forward to a new story in the near future?
I'm
always working on something. I have several books that I've shared on
my blog. I plan to get these ready to self-publish. The one I'm
currently sharing on my blog, Bad Fall, is actually a
companion novel to Conduct Unbecoming. The main character is
mentioned in Conduct Unbecoming, and one of the villains is
the same. I am also writing a sequel to Bad Fall, and it's an
extension of both Conduct Unbecoming and Bad Fall. The
title is A Matter of Time.
What
advice would you give an aspiring author?
Learn
grammar! I realize that makes me sound like an English teacher, which
I am, but it's important. I just finished reading a wonderful book
that had a great plot and held my interest, but the author kept
hopping from present to past tense. There were times that she
switched from first person narrative to third person in the same
sentence. It was a little frustrating. Also, PLEASE learn the
difference between LAY and LIE and use them right! That bugs the crap
out of me. I despair of ever winning that battle, because nearly
everyone does it wrong.
What
made you decide to venture into self-publishing?
I
love my publishers, but they are busy with other authors as well as
me. I have books I really want to have published, but can't get out
as soon as I'd like to. I've been afraid to do this until many of my
friends encouraged me to try it. Thank you Christina Giguere, Karen
Vaughan and Ethel Cook-Wilson for convincing me that I could, and
should, give it a try.
Excerpt from Chapter Four
As Jasper approached the door, he
prayed for inspiration. It was going to take some fast talking for
Nadeya not to freak out and kill him. He raised his hand to knock.
Rethinking his position, he moved so he wasn't standing directly in
front of the door, but slightly to the side so the thick, log wall
protected him. He tapped lightly and waited for a response. The
curtain over the tiny window moved aside imperceptibly. Only someone
trained to be observant would have seen it.
Jasper faced the window and
smiled. "I'm Jasper Waters," he said quietly. "I'm a
friend of Teague's. You hid on my boat."
The door opened a crack and one
dark, wary eye peered at him. "I remember you. What?"
"May I come in? The skeeters
are pretty nasty and they're feasting on me."
Nadeya took a step back, leaving
barely enough room for Jasper to squeeze through. She shut the door
with her foot and slammed him against the wall, one hand pulled up at
an uncomfortable angle behind him. She did a thorough frisking of
him, leaving no areas unearthed, before letting him go. She stepped
out of easy reach, eyeing him with a neutral expression.
"I just want to talk,"
Jasper said, holding his hands slightly from his sides.
"You're a cop. Why should I
talk to you?"
"Because I don't think you
killed that man on the beach. We're both friends of Teague's, maybe
we could build on that."
"Teague has lots of friends.
. . ."
"No, Teague knows every damn
body, but there are only a few of us the calls friends. You're one of
them. He told me what happened to your fiancé."
She tightened up. Jasper took a
step back, raising his hands.
"Would he share that with
just anyone?"
Nadeya's lower lip trembled
slightly and she blinked hard. Jasper caught the hint of a tear in
her eyes.
"He wouldn't unless he knew
I would help. You think I drop what I'm doing and run everyone
out to a crime scene just cause I'm nice? Teague and I trust each
other and I'd like to extend that courtesy to you, if you'll let me."
She stared at him several
minutes, sizing him up. She gestured to one of the two chairs near
the window. "Want some water or instant coffee? It's all I've
got."
"Water would be good,
thanks." Jasper sat.
Nadeya got two bottles of water
out of the mini-fridge and tossed him one. Jasper caught it with a
grin. His left hand gripped it as he twisted it open.
"Nicely done. Now you know
I'm a lefty."
Nadeya smirked. "And you're
not armed. I could have taken your head off."
"Yup, but I trusted you
wouldn't. And I thank you for that."
She nodded as she opened her own
bottle. "So, you're here, talk."
Jasper told her what he and
Teague had figured out about the man on the beach. He even told her
about C.L.A.D.
"You know about that?"
Nadeya leaned closer, whispering.
"Bits and pieces, nothing
concrete. What do you know?"
Nadeya looked furtive. "I
shouldn't tell you. We could get in a lot of trouble."
Jasper held his hands out, palms
up. "Who am I gonna tell? Except maybe Teague. Look, the more we
know about this, the better. What do you say?"
She looked away, biting her lip.
"I don't know much more than you do. The only thing I know for
sure was that it's supposed to be a way to reprogram people's minds."
"Like brain washing?"
"Kind of. More
sophisticated, but still a way to break them. I know that someone
else got ahold of it though. They were using it on us!"
Anger flared in her eyes.
"Us—as in you personally?"
"No. But some of our
soldiers. There was a captain I heard of, they tried to kill him off
in a raid, but he took out everyone who attacked his convoy. They
stole his memories and gave him a fucking medal."
"Shit! How do you know about
that?"
"The subject came up as they
tortured my fiancé," she mumbled.
Excerpt from Chapter Six
"You don't mind sharing with
me, do you?" Joel asked Aileen.
"Do you snore?"
"Not that anyone's ever told
me."
"Joel doesn't have
sleepovers often," Jasper said. "He wouldn't know."
Joel punched Jasper hard in the
chest. "Back the fuck off, Waters."
Vivica interceded once more. "Do
you guys need anything?"
"I've got a change of
clothing in the car," Joel said, heading outside to get it. He
slammed the door behind him.
Jasper watched him leave, jaw
working angrily. Vivica had to speak to him again to get his
attention.
"I just need a toothbrush
and some boxers. I'm good to go."
"Teague has some new ones
here somewhere. They should fit you. Hang on." She ducked into
the master bedroom and brought out a pair of plaid boxers.
Jasper thanked her and went in
the bathroom. Vivica and Aileen made the bed while he took a quick
shower. Joel still hadn't come back in. Concerned, Aileen called him,
but his phone went to voice mail.
"I'm going to go look for
him," she said.
Vivica nodded and tucked in the
blanket. Aileen went outside. She found Joel sitting on the
neighborhood dock, gazing at the moon. He looked up when she sat down
on another deck chair.
"He really gets under my
skin," he explained. "And I let him. I want to kick myself
in the ass."
"What's with you two. You
seem to hate each other."
"No. Jasper's a good guy,
he's just so competitive. I've been on the receiving end more times
than I'd like. He's a sore loser, but he's a worse winner. Problem
is, I am too." He chuckled, shaking his head. "We're too
damn much alike to be friends. The only reason we tolerate each other
is because of Teague."
"He's always had that
effect, hasn't he? I've never seen someone who can bring people
together and get the best out of them like he can. God, he had me
charmed and in his bed faster than any man I've ever met."
Joel held up his hand, halting
her monologue. "I can handle many things. But hearing how good
my cousin is at seducing a beautiful woman is not one of them."
"Jealous?"
"As all hell," Joel
admitted. He stared across the water.
"I can't imagine you've had
much trouble along that line," Aileen said quietly. She scooted
closer, shivering.
Joel flung an arm around her,
pulling her closer. "I'd loan you my jacket if I had one."
"This is good. So, you don't
want to know how he seduced me?"
"Nope. Why would I?"
"Because it might work for
you too."
Joel chuckled, rubbing her arm.
"There is that. Maybe I'll find my own way."
Aileen gazed into his eyes. They
looked silver in the moonlight. "How would you go about it?"
"First, I'd take you for a
ride in my sexy car."
She giggled. "And then?"
"Then I'd buy you a cup of
coffee and a slice of the best pie in town."
"Jasper actually did that."
"Yeah, but I drove you there
in my sexy car."
"True."
"Then I'd have me a temper
tantrum and storm outside like a three year old."
"Oooh, be still my
fluttering heart."
Joel turned his face to hers,
pulling her close. "Then, I reckon I'd get you by the river in
the moonlight and hope you let me kiss you."
Aileen leaned closer. Joel
brushed her cheek, touching her lips with his thumb. His lips met
hers—warm and soft and full. She shivered against him, but not
because she was cold. Joel's tongue flickered between her lips and
she opened them more. He took full advantage, deepening the kiss.
Sighing, they scooted closer
together. Joel touched Aileen's cheek, his fingers winding in her
hair. Gradually, his hand dropped to her shoulder before drifting
down to her breast. Teasing her, he traced circles over her shirt.
The screen door of Vivica's house
screeched, sounding loud in the still night. Joel's head snapped
around.
"You two okay?" Vivica
called.
"Yeah. Be right in, Viv.
Sorry," Joel replied. He stood, giving Aileen a hand up.
Her arm slipped around his waist.
"That was a nice kiss. I'd like to continue that sometime."
Joel sighed. "But I'm
guessing not tonight."
"Not tonight. But soon."
She started away from him.
Joel caught her hand, pulling her
back. The kiss was even more powerful when they were standing. His
firm body pressed against hers. It felt good to have a man show his
interest so definitively. There were no games with Joel. He liked
her, he was attracted. She had no intention of bedding a man she'd
known less than 12 hours—though it was damned tempting.
"How long did it take my
cousin," he whispered huskily. His breath tickled her neck.
"A week."
Joel nodded, smirking. Arm slung
around her shoulders, he planted a kiss on her cheek, smirking as
they walked to the house.
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